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kompamagazine
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 Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 10:59 am Post subject: FACTORY MIZIK "YOU": "FACE THE MUSIC" |
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Here is another edition of our "FACE THE MUSIC". This is what we need from the panel/members.
YOU will grade the song/artist in FOUR categories on a scale of 1 TO 5. In each one of the categories you tell us why you gave them the grade that you did (Could be brief or not)
Look at our RANKINGS GRADE CHART to see what each one of the scores mean.
5 BUZZWORTHY: Keep an eye on this group/artist.
4 GOOD: You got my attention, even though the song is not perfect
3 FAIR: Average piece of work
2 POOR: Needs a LOT OF WORK
1 UNACCEPTABLE: Should Not have gotten in the studio to waste our time
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A) HIT FACTOR/COMMERCIAL
B) MUSICIANSHIP
C) VOCALS
D) SUBJECT MATTER/LYRICS
SUMMARY/CLOSING ARGUMENT:
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*ARTIST: FACTORY MIZIK
*SONG: "YOU"
*CLICK ON THE LINK TO LISTEN TO THE SONG
http://www.kreyoltv.com/mp3/you.mp3
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Haitianone
Joined: 12 Mar 2006
Posts: 16180
Location: BOSTON,MA
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| Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 11:03 am Post subject: |
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A) HIT FACTOR/COMMERCIAL: 4
B) MUSICIANSHIP: 5
C) VOCALS: 5
D) SUBJECT MATTER/LYRICS: 4
SUMMARY/CLOSING ARGUMENT: This is a great song to introduce a new band but the name of the band sucks. Factory Mizik, come on now use something better!!!! Great track!!!
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choubenz
Joined: 03 Oct 2007
Posts: 13144
Location: NULOOK LARIVIERE
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| Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 11:11 am Post subject: |
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let me start by saying I don't like the name (Factory MUSIC)
back to business now----CHOUBENZ FEEL CHANTE SA, VERY GOOD SONG TO INTRODUCE YOURSELF TO THE PUBLIC
KOMANSMAN CHANTE A FE CHANT A ANPIL JISTIS---MWEN FEEL LI HARD
HIT FACTOR/COMMERCIAL-----3
MUSICIANSHIP-------------------4
VOCALS---------------------------4
SUBJECT MATTER/LYRICS-------4
GIN ON UNDERGROUND BAND KI RESI MARE CHOUBENZ
I am very impressed, keep on working hard guys------yeux Choubenz sou nou-----you guys did not waste my time, mwen pwal blast music sa nan mamchine mwen
@ Pat---do you have more information on these guys?where are the located, how long have they been working on that project, are they working on an album, how serious are they with this project
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konpa rockers
Joined: 17 Nov 2006
Posts: 7058
Location: do you really want to know!!!!!
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| Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 11:31 am Post subject: |
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A) HIT FACTOR/COMMERCIAL - 3.. nice mellow groove....
B) MUSICIANSHIP - 2.. this song sounds a little outdated...
C) VOCALS - 3.. the singer is ok...
D) SUBJECT MATTER/LYRICS - 2.. all I hear is "mete'm sou sa" and "I need you" in the song...
SUMMARY/CLOSING ARGUMENT: it's a nice track but it reminds me of the digital bands from the late 90's...
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DJ KOMPA
Joined: 01 Jul 2008
Posts: 2807
Location: WEST PALM BEACH,FL
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| Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 11:36 am Post subject: |
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A) HIT FACTOR/COMMERCIAL 5
B) MUSICIANSHIP 5
C) VOCALS 5
D) SUBJECT MATTER/LYRICS 4
SUMMARY/CLOSING ARGUMENT:THIS IS A NICE SONG THEY NEED TO PROMOTE IT.
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Kompa Love
Joined: 20 Jun 2006
Posts: 2631
Location: FL
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| Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 11:39 am Post subject: Re: FACTORY MIZIK "YOU": "FACE THE MUSIC" |
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A) HIT FACTOR/COMMERCIAL (3) It will do good if market correctly.
B) MUSICIANSHIP (3) Good sound..I like the keybord solo.
C) VOCALS (4) Different and good. Has identity.
D) SUBJECT MATTER/LYRICS (3) Love song. Consistent lyrics.
SUMMARY/CLOSING ARGUMENT: Good song! Wouldn't mind listening to what else he has.
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*ARTIST: FACTORY MIZIK
*SONG: "YOU"
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HIPchick
Joined: 01 Dec 2007
Posts: 1613
Location: NYC
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Net's slow, genertator is failing and it's a holiday today so I'll listen to it later 
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belfam
Joined: 11 Mar 2006
Posts: 8728
Location: stamford, ct
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Hit factor 3 if promotion is up to par has a litlle son lari
Musicianship 2 a little too degaish not too much originality
Vocals 2 different but not strong
Subject materials 2 too much repetitive lines
Summary Not a bad song nned to look for identity and
originalite. It started good but becomes a little boring
at the end. Needs improvement in lyrics and vocals
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metbeton
Joined: 17 Jul 2008
Posts: 851
Location: ELIZABETH - NEW JERSEY
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the intro was too long.
A)HIT FACTOR/COMMERCIAL 2.... but I did not feel it that much
B) MUSICIANSHIP..... 4 the musician have a nice little groov
C) VOCALS .... 3 his voince is ok
D) SUBJECT MATTER/LYRICS .....3 it is ok...
For such a new band the intro was too long.... You can make someone bored when liste to the tsonf. they will say next song please. |
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Evie
Joined: 25 Jul 2006
Posts: 6085
Location: Nan Peyi KM!!!
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| Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2008 5:45 pm Post subject: |
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5 BUZZWORTHY: Keep an eye on this group/artist.
4 GOOD: You got my attention, even though the song is not perfect
3 FAIR: Average piece of work
2 POOR: Needs a LOT OF WORK
1 UNACCEPTABLE: Should Not have gotten in the studio to waste our time
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A) HIT FACTOR/COMMERCIAL- 3-It's not a big bang for it to be considered a hit.
B) MUSICIANSHIP- 5- I think the keyboard and the guitar sound in the beginning is good. The guitar sound drives me crazy when the singer say" ha ha"...nice!!!! Lastly, when the guitar sound plays in the end when the people say "se pou ou" is also good!!! Conclusion...guitar and keyboard played WELL in my ear drums  ....two thumbs up for that...works well throughout the song !!!!
C) VOCALS - 4-Good except when the lead singer says, "Doodoo m'pap ka rete Oh Oh.....this I feel needs TO GO!!! The "oh oh" part needs to go!! WHY  I feel that is sounds a bit FRUITY (no offense)!!! Apres ti sa, everything else in the vocals is fine!!!!
D) SUBJECT MATTER/LYRICS - 4- Good except for the part when the singer says something to the effect that he's going to send an angel to her and that he knows she's married and she will not get divorced....for some reason, I don't feel that this is needed in the song  .
SUMMARY/CLOSING ARGUMENT: Overall, a great song!!! This band has potential based on this song. If you guys keep holding it down with the keyboard sound and guitar, especially the GUITAR, this song can go somewhere behond the KM board  !!!! Make a couple editions with the "oh oh" in the vocals and editions within the lyrics and this song should be good to go  . |
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